Tuesday, 21 March 2017

Camp MERC Acrostic Poem



Walt: edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback

Learning Reflection

I was able to change some of my sentence because some of them didn't make sense. 

Next time I will need to read carefully and fix up my mistake.


1 comment:

Mrs P said...

Awesome Camp Merc Poem - taking the time to get feedback from your peers is important because you can make changes to improve your writing.

Well done.